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 The `"Old Roblox Community"` is a general term that denotes a person as someone who is interested in older versions of the MMO game Roblox. Unlike other online communities, The ORC is very splintered, to the point where calling it a Community is only due to a leftover from when it was more connected.
 
-It has existed since 2010[^1], though it has it's roots as early as 2007. It only started seeing the creation of private servers for older versions as early as 2012[^2]. Many have noted that, since Roblox was only a year old at the time, it would be weird to wish for a return to older versions.
+It has existed since 2010[^1], though it has it's roots as early as 2007. The small group of people in 2007 were critcized, due to Roblox officially being created only a year prior. It only started seeing the creation of private servers for older versions as early as 2012[^2].
 
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 [^1]:[Retro Day 2010 - Fun at projcter 06er](https://youtu.be/_CcCvbvpYVg)
 
 [^2]: Citation needed.